RANKED TOP 15 “CREAM OF THE CROP” SCRIPT CONSULTANTS!Get professional, constructive notes from the Executive Perspective. With tailor made packages to suit you and your project, it’s like working with your own personal development exec. And no middle man means you pay less!
Let Danny Manus take the bull out of your script!
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Services & Prices
I pride myself on being able to tailor a package to suit every writer and every project. Below you’ll find a list of services offered. If you are looking for something else or you’re not sure which service would be right for you and your script, please contact me and I’ll walk you through it!
If you know what service(s) you’d like, simply click on it below and proceed to checkout. After you check out and make your payment, please submit your script by emailing the script to me directly. No other forms are necessary. Be sure to check my Policies and FAQs before making any purchases.
PLEASE NOTE: All prices listed are for scripts 125 pages or less. For each page beyond 125, please add $3 per page using the additional page service listed below. See the FAQs page for more policies and information.
Basic Studio Notes (4-5 pgs)
Notes include general comments on your story, structure, concept, characters, dialogue, tone, etc., plus specific concrete suggestions on how to improve them and bring out the most commercial aspects of your story and concept. Does NOT include synopsis.
*Add a Synopsis to Basic Studio Notes*
Extensive Notes (7-9 pgs)
Includes 1-2 pg synopsis! Comments will include specific notes and suggestions on how to improve overall writing, story, structure, characters, pacing, stakes, climax and resolution, specific problem scenes, tone, overall commercial potential, etc.
60 Minute Development Notes Phone Consultation
Submit your script and we’ll discuss my in-depth notes on the phone for a whole hour! We will go through all the notes necessary to make your script shine. Service does not include written notes.
Special!! Extensive Notes & 60-Min Phone Consult Package!
Our most popular service! 7-9 pages of detailed notes including a 1-2 page synopsis, then discuss these notes and your comments with me for a full hour. That’s a savings of $50!!
Extensive TV Script Notes Up to 50 Pages (4-5 pgs)
Notes will discuss all essential elements (as listed above) plus overall series viability and vision. Does not include synopsis.
Extensive TV Script Notes Up to 80 Pages (4-5 pgs)
Notes will discuss all essential elements (as listed above) plus overall series viability and vision.
In-Depth Analysis w/Page by Page Notes (12-15 pgs)
Includes 1-2 pg synopsis. Notes include a general overview plus all the extensive script notes described above but even more in-depth. Plus, specific line by line dialogue notes and suggestions on how to best market your script.
60 Minute General Phone Consultation
Discuss your idea, script, story, pitch or general business questions with me for a full hour! Price does not include reading the script, but does include reading a synopsis or short treatment.
First Act/30 Minute Phone Consult
Make sure your script is on the right track! Due to popular demand, you can now submit your first act (first 35 pages or less) and let’s discuss if your story is going in the right direction, if it’s set up properly, and if you’re grabbing the reader early enough. No written notes included.
Query Letter Service
Make sure you’re making the best first impression possible with a professional query letter that shines! I’ve read well over 2,500 query letters and know how to write ones that grab attention and sell! Get your query letter edited or written from scratch.
Professional Script Polishing/Editing/Reformatting
PLEASE email me first before ordering this service! Service includes an extensive polish on dialogue and description to bring out your voice and make your pages shine! Also includes a full editing of your script for typos, grammatical mistakes, correct screenplay formatting, and (if necessary) reformatting your script from Word to Final Draft. Service also includes a 60 minute follow-up phone consultation. Turnaround time and prices vary.
Prices Begin at $500.00
Rush Services for Query Letters and Basic Notes
Put a RUSH on your Basic Notes or Query Letter Service! Guaranteed 4 business-day turnaround!
Rush Services for Extensive Notes
Put a RUSH on your Extensive Notes Service! Guaranteed 4 business-day turnaround!
Additional pages over 125
Additional pages over 125
$3.00/pg
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Other services are available on request including Brainstorming Sessions, Short Film Script Notes, Pitch Consultations, In-Person Consultations, etc. Please contact me at Daniel@nobullscript.net for rates and more information!
SERVICES FOR PRODUCERS/FINANCIERS: Have you had to cut back your staff? Don’t want interns giving you notes on an important project? Need an accurate market perspective on your projects? Let me be your development exec for hire! Whether you are in or out of Los Angeles, I can provide professional cast lists, director lists and writer lists which all include up to date agency/agent information and credits, as well as submission lists complete with executive names and contact info, to help your project along. Prices for these services vary by project. Please contact me or call (310) 876-1153 to discuss these services.
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