Notes include comprehensive and constructive comments on your story, structure, concept, characters, dialogue, tone, etc., plus specific concrete suggestions on how to improve them and bring out the most commercial aspects of your story and concept. Does not include synopsis.

Must purchase a basic, extensive, or phone notes service to add a synopsis. Not offered as a stand-alone service.

Notes include specific and comprehensive suggestions on overall writing, story, hook, structure, a breakdown of all major characters, pacing, stakes, climax and resolution, specific problem scenes, tone, extended dialogue and line notes, formatting issues, plus overall commercial potential and marketing strategies. Add a Synopsis for just $50!

Once we’ve done notes on your script, you can submit any subsequent drafts (within one year) for less! It’s the same as the Basic Notes Service but I’ll go through all the changes you made that worked and what areas may still need to be worked on. Also includes new grading sheet. **For a Second Draft Submission on Phone Notes or TV Pilot Notes, it is $275.

My most popular service! This service is for Features AND 60 Minute TV Pilots. We’ll discuss your script and my in-depth notes via phone, skype or zoom for up to 2 hours. We will go page-by-page through all the specific notes and constructive suggestions necessary to make your script even stronger. Service does not include written notes. Turnaround is quicker than written notes. You are welcome to record the call.

9-12 pages of detailed notes, major character breakdowns, commercial potential analysis, and specific dialogue and lines notes. Plus, we’ll discuss the notes, suggestions or changes by phone, zoom, or Skype for an hour. You can also ADD a Synopsis for $50!

Written Notes will be 6-7 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision. Will also include specific dialogue notes. Does not include synopsis. Phone Notes for 30 Min Pilots are $275.

Written Notes are 6-8 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) in-depth, plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision, as well as specific dialogue notes.

PURCHASE THREE CONSULTS & GET ONE FREE! Can be used separately, any time within one year.  Let’s discuss and brainstorm your latest ideas, loglines, treatment, outline, or work out your pitch. Or if you have general biz questions, are having trouble taking your career to the next level, or need help navigating the waters of Hollywood, I can help! Each consult is about an hour. Price does not include reading a script, but does include reading loglines, synopses, pitches or short treatments.

Make sure your script is on the right track. Submit your first act (first 30 pages) and we’ll discuss if your story is going in the right direction, if your setups are working, characters are engaging, if you’re grabbing the reader and any changes that need to be made. Call is one hour long via phone, skype or zoom. No written notes included.

Be sure you’re making the best first impression possible with a professional query letter that makes them want to read more! I’ve read thousands of query letters and know how to write ones that grab attention and sell! Fix your already existing query letter or have one written from scratch.

*PLEASE email me first before ordering this service! Service includes an extensive polish on dialogue, action, transitions and descriptions to bring out your voice and make your pages shine and your script flow! Also includes a full editing for typos, grammatical errors, correct screenplay formatting, and (if necessary) reformatting your script into Final Draft. A Written or Phone Notes service MUST be completed before a Polish can be done. Polishing prices vary from $1000-$3000, so please email to inquire first. Turnaround time and price vary depending on how extensive the polish is.

Put a RUSH on your Basic Notes or Query Letter Service! Guaranteed 1 week turnaround! (not including day submitted)

Put a RUSH on your Extensive Notes Service! Turnaround is 1 week! (not including day submitted)

Enjoy the recording of the 2+ Hour Live Zoom Seminar going through tons of tips and strategies for pitching and marketing your scripts (even from home). We go through different outlets for breaking in, how the business may change after Covid, the 5 C’s every pitch must contain, how to know what your script’s purpose is, and much more. (No logline review included, that was only for the Live event)

For book writers wondering if your manuscript or novel is ready for agents and publishers, if it could make for a great film or TV series, or how to adapt your story into a screenplay. I will read your book/manuscript and we’ll have an in-depth phone conversation going over your story, plot, characters, dialogue, pacing, what works in each chapter, if it could be a movie and how to get it there. Please note – this is NOT a book editing service. Price listed is for manuscripts 275 pages or less (about 70,000 words). Please email me first if over 275 pages.

You can submit your short film script (15 pages or less) and we will go through it page by page on an hour-long call via phone, skype or zoom.

Registration for Fall Session is now Closed. All spots are currently filled. The Spring 2022 session will begin Feb 1. Registration will open in December 2021!

4 Months of In-Depth Phone Notes, Brainstorming Consults and Career Coaching.  This is a personalized, customized development process  where we set specific goals, deadlines, do notes calls every 2 weeks (each call is about 2 hrs) and we can cover any scripts, pilots, treatments, query letters, etc. This does NOT include books or manuscripts. This is NOT for first time writers or first scripts, you must have more than one completed script to register. If interested, please message me to schedule an Introductory Call before purchasing. We’ll work together to decide which projects to work on, and we can take your idea from outline to finished first draft, from first drafts to polished, marketable screenplays – or both! And we’ll strategize ways to take your career to the next level. Price is $1300 if paid in one payment, $1400 if split into two payments. Email me for more details.