Notes include comprehensive and constructive comments on your story, structure, concept, characters, dialogue, tone, etc., plus specific concrete suggestions on how to improve them and bring out the most commercial aspects of your story and concept. Does not include synopsis.

My most popular service! This service is for Features (120 pgs or less) or 60-Minute TV Pilots (65 pgs or less). We’ll discuss your script and my in-depth notes via phone or zoom for about 2 hours. We will go page-by-page through all the specific notes and constructive suggestions necessary to make your script even stronger. Service does not include written notes but DOES include a recording of the call AND a written summary of the call. Turnaround is quicker than written notes.

Written Notes are 6-8 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) in-depth, plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision, as well as specific dialogue notes. For pilots over 65 pages, please use the Extra Pages option.

Written Notes are 6-7 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision. Will also include specific dialogue notes. Does not include synopsis. Comprehensive PHONE Notes for 30 Min Pilots are $275!

Let’s discuss and brainstorm your latest ideas, loglines, treatment, outline, or work out your pitch. Or if you have general biz questions, are having trouble taking your career to the next level, or need help navigating the waters of Hollywood, let’s talk! Each consult is an hour long. Price includes reading loglines, synopses, treatments, outlines or pitches. It does not include reading a script.

Extensive Written Notes include 10-15 pages of detailed and comprehensive notes and suggestions on overall writing, concept, story, hook, structure, a breakdown of all major characters, pacing, stakes, climax and resolution, specific scene notes, extended dialogue and line notes, formatting issues, plus overall commercial potential analysis. This service is for Features or 60-Minute Pilots only.  Plus, we’ll discuss the notes, suggestions or changes by phone or zoom for an hour.

Make sure your feature script is on the right track. Submit your first act (first 30 pages) and we’ll discuss if your story is going in the right direction, if your setups are working, characters are engaging, if you’re grabbing the reader and any changes that need to be made. Call is one hour long via phone, skype or zoom. No written notes included.

You can submit your short film script (about 15 pages or less) and we will go through it page by page on an hour-long call via phone, skype or zoom.

Put a RUSH on your Extensive Notes Service! Turnaround is 1 week! (not including day submitted)

Put a RUSH on your Basic Notes or Query Letter Service! Guaranteed 1 week turnaround! (not including day submitted)

Be sure you’re making the best first impression possible with a professional query letter that makes them want to read more! I’ve read thousands of query letters and know how to write ones that grab attention and sell! Fix your already existing query letter or have one written from scratch.

*PLEASE email me first before ordering this service! Service includes an extensive polish on dialogue, action, transitions and descriptions to bring out your voice and make your pages shine and your script flow! Also includes a full editing for typos, grammatical errors, correct screenplay formatting, and (if necessary) reformatting your script into Final Draft. A Written or Phone Notes service MUST be completed before a Polish can be done. Polishing prices vary from $1000-$3000, so please email to inquire first. Turnaround time and price vary depending on how extensive the polish is.

Enjoy the recording of the 2+ Hour Live Zoom Seminar going through all the ins and outs of Screenwriting Contests. Why you should (or shouldn’t) enter, what to expect, why most writers do – or don’t – advance in contests, how to use and leverage contests even if you don’t place, what contests are worth entering, why writers don’t think contests are worthwhile, the truth about Fellowships, and how to know if you’re READY for the Win.

Your Loglines and Query Letters are a necessary tool for getting read and getting rep’d! And these first impressions are everything. In this 3-Hour Zoom Webinar Recording, you will learn the keys and necessary components of writing compelling Loglines and Query Letters for Film and TV. You will get clear formulas, strategies and examples for crafting proper loglines and queries for both producers and reps, plus the difference between loglines & taglines, logline/query pitfalls, and tips to get execs to request your script and open your email! Once purchased, you will receive an email with a private link and password to the recording to enjoy at your leisure. Purchase does NOT include a Logline fix.

UPDATE: There will no longer be a set Fall and Spring session. You can register for your own longer-term, personalized SCRIPT DEVELOPMENT & COACHING PROGRAM year round! And you can choose a 3-Month (6 calls) or 4-Month (8-calls) option. The program  includes ongoing in-depth notes calls and deadlines to help you write, rewrite, and polish your scripts (can do multiple scripts) to get them truly ready. Program also includes loglines, query letters, brainstorming, pitching, career coaching and submission strategizing. It’s like being in the development process with your own personal and experienced coach guiding you through it all. We will set specific goals and do calls every 2 weeks. Each call is 2 hours. 

You also get: TWO Additional Free Webinars, my exclusive Character Building Profile and Insider Production Company Listings, a 10% Discount on Notes for 2 Years after your Program ends, and more!

This is NOT for first time writers or first scripts, you must have more than one completed script to register. If interested, please message me to schedule an Introductory Call before purchasing. Cost is $1600 for the 3-Month option and $1850 for 4-Months. Email me for a free Intro Call today!