Notes include comprehensive and constructive comments on your story, structure, concept, characters, dialogue, tone, etc., plus specific concrete suggestions on how to improve them and bring out the most commercial aspects of your story and concept. Does not include synopsis.

My most popular service! This service is for Features (120 pgs or less) or 60-Minute TV Pilots (65 pgs or less). We’ll discuss your script and my in-depth notes via phone or zoom for about 2 hours. We will go page-by-page through all the specific notes and constructive suggestions necessary to make your script even stronger. Service does not include written notes but DOES include a recording of the call AND a written summary of the call. Turnaround is quicker than written notes.

Written Notes are 7-9 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) in-depth, plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision, as well as specific dialogue notes. For pilots over 65 pages, please use the Extra Pages option.

Written Notes are 6-8 pages and discuss all essential elements (as listed above) plus overall series viability, scope, voice and vision. Will also include specific dialogue notes. Does not include synopsis.

Let’s discuss and brainstorm your latest ideas, loglines, treatment, outline, or work out your pitch. Or if you have general biz questions, are having trouble taking your career to the next level, or need help navigating the waters of Hollywood, let’s talk! Each consult is an hour long. Price includes reading loglines, synopses, treatments, outlines or pitches. It does not include reading a script.

Extensive Written Notes include 10-15 pages of detailed and comprehensive notes and suggestions on overall writing, concept, story, hook, structure, a breakdown of all major characters, pacing, stakes, climax and resolution, specific scene notes, extended dialogue and line notes, formatting issues, plus overall commercial potential analysis. Plus, we’ll discuss the notes, suggestions or changes by phone/zoom for an hour. This service is for Features or 60-Minute Pilots only.

Make sure your feature script is on the right track. Submit your first act (first 30 pages) and we’ll discuss if your story is going in the right direction, if your setups are working, characters are engaging, if you’re grabbing the reader and any changes that need to be made. Call is one hour long via phone, skype or zoom. No written notes included.

You can submit your short film script (about 15 pages or less) and we will go through it page by page on an hour-long call via phone, skype or zoom.

Be sure you’re making the best first impression possible with a professional query letter that makes them want to read more! I’ve read thousands of query letters and know how to write ones that grab attention and sell! Fix your already existing query letter or have one written from scratch.

Put a RUSH on your Extensive Notes Service! Turnaround is 1 week! (not including day submitted)

Put a RUSH on your Comprehensive Written Notes, Notes Calls or Query Letter! Guaranteed 1 week turnaround! (not including day submitted)

My popular Mentorship Program is BACK! And is now being offered year-round (not just in spring and fall sessions) and is even more personalized and customizable so you can work on WHAT you need,  WHEN you need. The Mentorship is a 1-on-1 coaching program that helps guide you through the development process, wherever you may be in that process. You can start in the outline stage and write a full draft of a new script, or you can start with completed drafts and work with me through the rewrite and polish process to get your scripts truly ready for submission. You can work on one or multiple scripts, depending on which package you choose.

You have the choice of 6 calls, 8 calls, or 10 calls. Cost ranges depending on the number of calls. We can create the package that’s right for you and your goals. You get set deadlines to help keep you on target, in-depth notes calls (plus a recording and written summary), marketing help (loglines, queries, pitch docs), and career coaching for that next step.  This is NOT for first time writers working on their first script! This is for writers who are trying to reach that next level and get their scripts written and truly ready.

My Mentees over the last 8 years have been produced, sold, staffed, signed, optioned, hired for OWAs, and have won or been finalists in almost every major contest. If you’re ready for that next step, or want more information on pricing, please email me and let’s set up a free intro call to chat about what you’re working on, your next goals, and how we can get you there.

*PLEASE email me first before ordering this service! Service includes an extensive polish on dialogue, action, transitions and descriptions to bring out your voice and make your pages shine and your script flow! Also includes a full editing for typos, grammatical errors, correct screenplay formatting, and (if necessary) reformatting your script into Final Draft. A Written or Phone Notes service MUST be completed before a Polish can be done. Polishing prices vary from $1000-$3000, so please email to inquire first. Turnaround time and price vary depending on how extensive the polish is.

Enjoy the recording of the 2+ Hour Live Zoom Seminar going through all the ins and outs of Screenwriting Contests. Why you should (or shouldn’t) enter, what to expect, why most writers do – or don’t – advance in contests, how to use and leverage contests even if you don’t place, what contests are worth entering, why writers don’t think contests are worthwhile, the truth about Fellowships, and how to know if you’re READY for the Win.

Your Loglines and Query Letters are a necessary tool for getting read and getting rep’d! And these first impressions are everything. In this 3-Hour Zoom Webinar Recording, you will learn the keys and necessary components of writing compelling Loglines and Query Letters for Film and TV. You will get clear formulas, strategies and examples for crafting proper loglines and queries for both producers and reps, plus the difference between loglines & taglines, logline/query pitfalls, and tips to get execs to request your script and open your email! Once purchased, you will receive an email with a private link and password to the recording to enjoy at your leisure. Purchase does NOT include a Logline fix.