Extensive Written Notes include 10-15 pages of detailed and comprehensive notes and suggestions on overall writing, concept, story, hook, structure, a breakdown of all major characters, pacing, stakes, climax and resolution, specific scene notes, extended dialogue and line notes, formatting issues, plus overall commercial potential analysis. This service is for Features or 60-Minute Pilots only.  Plus, we'll discuss the notes, suggestions or changes by phone or zoom for an hour.